Had the crit, went okay but some points that came up was that it looked quite childish and that some preferred the lowercase designs i had done. Once the point of it looking quite childish came up I understood what they meant, the letters do a bit look like toy blocks and the colour scheme plays a large part in it as in b&w it does look a lot different.
I would love to leave it as it is and move onto the next project however now these points have been raised and they i feel are somewhat correct i must develop it further.
Went back to the drawing board...
Looking back at the lower case designs, i started once more with these, and taking them into a similar composition as the previous finalised design. From here coming to the bottom image.
No comments:
Post a Comment